My favorite writing is what impels and inspires me to sit down with my pen and get at it. Sometimes even before finishing said piece that first inspired! Glad to be of assistance. FTR: I am not a lactating breast seeker, though I have tried it once almost forty years ago.
Love the spontaneity. The allowing the mind to move. You're great at finding little imaginative folds within which to implement these motions. Very energetic and enjoyable.
Thanks Daisy! One of those that just came to me. Opening lines are so important and sometimes hard to find so I’m grateful when they simply appear.
My favorite writing is what impels and inspires me to sit down with my pen and get at it. Sometimes even before finishing said piece that first inspired! Glad to be of assistance. FTR: I am not a lactating breast seeker, though I have tried it once almost forty years ago.
Haha yes well you weren’t suspected by me at any rate!
I was about thirty years old. It was too rich, but seeing as my mother did not breast feed her kids I had to try. Not my mother’s mind you.
Amazing what one learns by simply writing about something!
Love the spontaneity. The allowing the mind to move. You're great at finding little imaginative folds within which to implement these motions. Very energetic and enjoyable.
I think your comment deserves its own complimentary review! :). Thank you so much Jason! Like you, I continue to experiment.
Please do continue. I find your energy helpful.
Likewise!
I agree with Daisy the opening line is great, as is the rest of the piece.
Thanks so much Michael! Glad you enjoyed it.
what an opening line!
It was a dark and stormy night.................................
Mother died today.
Mother died today, I was the one who had to clean up the mess that she left.
Striking fear in the heart of the reader “perhaps I should stop right here.”
I will take you subtle hint, and "stop right here."
Haha!